Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, December 10, 2020
Summer learning journey warm up
Thursday, August 13, 2020
Bad vs Good blog comments!
This week, I partnered up with Elsha and we have been learning about what makes a good blog comment vs what makes a bad blog comment. We learnt that a blog comment should include the following:
- Positive sentence
- Thoughtful sentence
- Helpful sentence
- Name at the end
Here is a google drawing showing our learning about what makes a good blog comment
We learnt that bad comments don't include the following:
- Positive sentence
- Helpful sentence
- Thoughtful sentence
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