narrative writing

this for writing we had to write a short narrative. We could pick out of these options left behind,mirror in the attic,lightning never strikes twice and the creature from the deep. I chose left be hind here is my short narrative.

Left behind

“Where are we going, pilot James” questioned Jessica “we are going on my flying ship to go to somewhere magical” answered pilot James “OK” replied Jessica. Once we got on the flying ship we set sail to the magical place Pilot James was talking about.

When we made it to the magical place we landed on the green grass with hills surrounding it. “I thought you said magic” Jessica asked pilot James in confusion pilot James replied “I did but I guess I was wrong”. When we started walking around we saw black and grey birds flying through the sky but there were no houses in sight.

At the end of our trip pilot James was getting the flying ship ready for us to go back home. Then Jessica got distracted by a shadowy figure. She followed the shadow until it stopped, she leaped out from behind it and it was a person she asked him what he was doing here he said “I was following you from the start then you noticed me so I had to run” after that she headed back to the place where pilot James was.

When she headed back to pilot James she was looking for his ship but she couldn’t see it. Then she realised it was up in the sky and yelled “hey come back pilot James you left me behind” but he didn’t listen so she was thinking for a minute of how to get back. Then she got an idea she made a fire and waited for someone to notice it. Then a plane flew over top of her and turned around to land. When the plane landed it opened the door and a man walked out and told me to come in. When she got back she said thank you to the pilot and saw pilot James standing on the doc in front of his ship. He is in for a treat!

did you like my story. what narrative topic would you write about?