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Thursday, December 17, 2020

Summer learnng journey haiku poems

today i had to make a screencastify about three haiku poems i made

click on the link below to watch it

video 

if you dont want to watch the video the you can read my poem on these pictures





hope you like my poem what would you change in my haiku peom?




1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Zoe,

    Fiona here from the Summer Learning Journey team. I am so impressed by your awesome haiku poems and how you made a Screencastify video to share them on your blog. Ka pai! I think your lyrics are fantastic and I wouldn't change anything about them!
    I really like how you have included really great background images - these visuals bring your poems to life. Have you written haiku poems in school before?

    For doing an awesome job completing both the Kickstart and Step it Up activities, I am marking this as a standout blog so it earns BONUS POINTS. Great stuff Zoe!

    I'm really excited to see more of your awesome work over the summer.

    Keep up the fantastic mahi!

    Mā te wā,
    Fiona (SLJ).

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