today i had to make a screencastify about three haiku poems i made
click on the link below to watch it
if you dont want to watch the video the you can read my poem on these pictures
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
today i had to make a screencastify about three haiku poems i made
click on the link below to watch it
if you dont want to watch the video the you can read my poem on these pictures
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Zoe,
ReplyDeleteFiona here from the Summer Learning Journey team. I am so impressed by your awesome haiku poems and how you made a Screencastify video to share them on your blog. Ka pai! I think your lyrics are fantastic and I wouldn't change anything about them!
I really like how you have included really great background images - these visuals bring your poems to life. Have you written haiku poems in school before?
For doing an awesome job completing both the Kickstart and Step it Up activities, I am marking this as a standout blog so it earns BONUS POINTS. Great stuff Zoe!
I'm really excited to see more of your awesome work over the summer.
Keep up the fantastic mahi!
Mā te wā,
Fiona (SLJ).