Summer Learning journey week 1 make a song chorus

 this week for the Summer Learning Journey I had to make a song chorus I chose to make the topic of the chorus about saving the world  it was fun making the lyrics, here is my song chorus

here is link to how my song would sound like

link

what topic would you have done it on?

Summer Learning Journey week 1 what are you doing today

 today I made a screencastify on how to say "what are you doing today" and "I am going to..." in Maori here is my link to my screencastify

I hope you like my screencastify and would you use this In real life?

summer learning journey week 1 Insect Art

 Today for the Summer Learnng Journey I had to make a Insect out of things you can find in your backyard like Leaves, petals, sticks and more, I chose to make a green butterfly out of leaves, sticks and yucca here is my art

what Insect would you create?

Summer learning journey warm up

today I did a warm up for the sumer learning journey we had to do and activity were you go on a site called ART COLOURING BOOK it is a were you can find picture or painting then you colour it with different colours here is my art work of Big Ben.

what picture or painting would you choose?

Bad vs Good blog comments!

This week, I partnered up with Elsha and we have been learning about what makes a good blog comment vs what makes a bad blog comment. We learnt that a blog comment should include the following:

• Positive sentence
• Thoughtful sentence
• Helpful sentence
• Name at the end

Here is a google drawing showing our learning about what makes a good blog comment

We learnt that bad comments don't include the following:

• Positive sentence
• Helpful sentence
• Thoughtful sentence

Did you like our blog and learn something new from it?

litracey writing week 11

this week for writing Mrs Earl our principal read a book to us called the word collecter then she started to write a story with an adverbrial phrase, repitition and rhetorical question in the story the adverbrial phrase is discribing what time of day it is for exsample as the sun faded away.  now I am going to tell you what repitition is repitition is were you repeat some thing a few times for exsample why did he not listen to his mum why did he not pay atention then you could do a few more starting with why did he not. What is a rhetorical question, a rhetorical question is when you ask a question but you dont answer it for exsample would he get out of this nightmare? while she was writing the story she showed us this thing called the shade o meter the shade o meter makes plain words become more interesting for exsample sat we came up with words like spralwed stretch lounge and more then we would pick a word and put it in the story. After the story Mrs Earl showed us the a volcabluray vault it is wear we put all are words we collect. After that she had a task for my writing class that we had to write a 9 sentance narrative about a sertane picture.

here is my 9 sentance story.(the high lighted words are the three things that I talked about)(my story might be over 9 sentance's I hope you lie my story)

Seal Pup

As the sky started to fill with darkness,  Pup and his mum were walking to their sleeping spot. On the way there Pup got distracted by a white fox he started to follow the white fox  then after a while pup got lost. Pup started to look around and started to feel worried about being all alone with know one around to help him. He was very scared. He was worried he would not get back to his mum. He was worried he would be alone forever. Then he sprawled on the ice and cried and thought about how to get back to his mum and how he got lost. Why did he not listen to his mum, why did he not pay attention, why did he go away from his mum. How would he get out of this problem?

if you had to write a 9 sentance story about the seal pup what would your adverbrial phrase, rhepitition and retorical question be?

rounding numbers

this week for Maths my learning goal is : round whole numbers to the nearest 10,100,1000 I did there posters here are my posters of my work.(I posted this late so this maths was nit for this week)
         

hope you like my work. did you already know this strategy?